My new story
This is a story of adventure, faith(in God), patience, obedience, and perseverance.
In America
Introduction
The year is 1808.Tennessee US. late summer (harvest time). A farmer in the New world had two daughters.
One of them the Oldest had hair the color of the fiery
redness of the setting sun,
eyes the color of chestnuts, lips the color of peaches and rosy cheeks.
Her name was Ann. She was 16.
The younger had hair the color of freshly churned butter, eyes the color of blue topaz,
lips of ruby, and her soft
skin was as white and pink as a perfect apple.
Her name was Priscilla. She was 14.
Their father had hair the color of sand, dark skin from working in the sun.
He had eyes the same as Priscilla’s.
His name was Mr. Smith.
They had 3 horses, 5 cows, 10 sheep, 9 chickens, 5 pigs, a collie, a bulldog, and a terrier,
they had 10 acres of wheat,
8 acres of fenced land for the cows, sheep, and horses.
2 acres of fenced land for the pigs, half an acre and a coop for the chickens, and 1 acre for gardening.
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Hey Liddybug, I was just wondering, did you write the whole story already, or are you making it up as you go?
P.S. It’s good!
Liddybug don’t listen to Boone, I think you did a good job on giving wonderful details to your story(the most important key to good story telling). Is there more to come?