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Posted By: Deanna

It seems like there has been a lot of leaving in my life lately, both new friends and old moving on in their own lives, and it has been a humbling experience for me to realize how important I’m not. Anyway, I have been trying to write a farewell poem for a long time, and I think I finally have.

Why must you leave me my friend?

I know separation does not mean the end,

and maybe when the west wind tall grasses bend,

you will remember me.

Don’t mind my sad tears, dear companion.

It’s not that I think you intend to forget…

and maybe when Zephyr sings through the canyon,

will you remember me?

I do not love a painful leavetaking,

and I promise you won’t see how my heart is breaking.

But by the west wind I’ll send a message so true,

listen, he’ll whisper…”I remember you.”

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Comments

  1. Amanda adds her thoughts::

    Oh Deanna! that is beautiful! you did a wonderful job. :)

  2. Vanessa adds her thoughts::

    That is absolutely beautiful writing.

  3. joanna adds her thoughts::

    love it. especially that you didn’t try to force it to rhyme. it flows perfectly.

  4. Tommy Funcle adds her thoughts::

    From your Funcle…”applaud”

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